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Samgee Gamwise
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This is a questionaire about the more recent posts telling of the life of Seth. This is my RP here on the board, heck, this is my first RP any were besides in a preexisting nintendo and/or squaresoft made game. (which all, by the way, rocked insidiously) So I was curious to know what the readers and fellow posters thought of it.

Honestly, [u]I am[/u] going for the quirky yet battle readiness that can be found in the movie[i] Army of Darkness[/i]. So if your coment is directed toward me getting rid of the comedic element, sorry. But if you think I'm taking the wrong angle with the bit of laughter "then speak up all those who have tounges that are not without use". I would especialy appriciate the oppinions of anyone who has played the games, and mods likewise.

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There's nothing wrong with comedy being implemented in your role-plays. Especially with your character choice. It lends a dark edge.

If you truly want contructive criticism, then you can work a bit on adding just a touch more descriptive details. Other than that, your role-plays are very creative. Good writing. :thumbs up:
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[color=indigo]Despite the fact that I can't get the image of the DOOM Marine walking along singing that [i]stupid[/i] song out of my head, your posts have been pretty good. You might consider using fewer exclamation points and periods, though. One to three exclamation points and a simple three periods in a row is all that's necessary. Any more, and it just clutters up the sentence, and doesn't actually change anything. You can only yell so loud and a pause is a pause. People aren't going to sit there going down a full line of periods, lol. They're going to pause the same as if there were only three periods.[/color]
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