Writing Lying Alone In My Mind..

[Biida]

[b][u]Lying [i]Alone[/i] In My Mind..[/b][/u]

As I lie in my void..
As I lie in my mind..
I search for myself,
And what do I find?

A creature that hides in the back of my soul.
Fangs gleam as they threaten to devour me whole.

Whilest I stare intently
Into the eyes of my fate..
What [i]more[/i] do I find?
That the thing is my Hate.

The Demons made one.
My hate placed inside..
The depression and guilt..
Trying to hide..
(In the body of an Angel.)

They've ripped me apart.
They've toyed with my mind,
And clawed at my heart.

And what else will I find?..

That they are all one,
And One is all they.

Then they begin to take shape
And mold me like clay.

(They are the emotions that make who I am..)

Oh, how I hate that foul beast,
How that foul beast hates me.
We both hate each other
As it's simple to see.

It snarls as it rakes at the edge of my brain
And as the creature take over
I soon feel the pain.

As I panic and scream
And look for a way out,
I remember the truth,
That I'm just in myself.

As I open my eyes..
[i]What else could I find?[/i]
Nothing but the fact I'm still trapped in my mind.

[Deedlit]

[color=green]*applauds* I LOVE that poem, Britty! ^^ *applauds some more*[/color]

[Shinobi]

well,what can i say....WOW, Enough said.

[Dragonz Fyre]

wow brit, thats great. *sniffles*

[Sui Generis]

[i]*applauds approvingly*[/i] Yet another great creation made by Brit, great job! By the way glad your back! Can't wait to read more!

Your poems kick ***!

[Mitch]

[color=red] Very nice. I liked how you used [b]And what do I find?
[/b] numerous times, it added fluid rhythm to the entire poem. I want to see more...[/color]

[Mina]

Awesome poem. Loved it. The feeling,structure,all.

[Raquel]

I hate it how you underestimate yourself... Your great! I love your stuff... And if i hear any more of this "Your so much better than me, I could never do that" crap, I'll come up there and it'll get personal... o.- Your doin great... Keep up the good work...

~Siren~*