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[i][color=royal blue]150 years ago, a young woman named Aeriel gave her heart to a vampyre, a darkangel. He turned into a human, his own leaden heart removed of its lead coating and beating within Aeriel's chest. Aeriel battled againt a demon Witch named called the lorelei. The witch vowed vengeance on her, her family, and the Wardens of the World for the Pearl of the Soul of the World had killed her in the final moments of the war. Aeriel had already suffered the "pin" and a loss, fonding that her husband Illyrath hated her. However, upon the Witch's death, Illyrath again rekindled his love for Aeriel, only to die in his quest to regain her. Now Aeriel has completed her task of rebuilding the world and enjoys the love of her grandchildren who bear the abilit of the Ancients to stand strong against age. It is time for the lorelei Oriencor's vengeance, in the form of Aeriel's grandson. Young Tensorei had appeared to be normal. In fact, he looked cheerful. But his grandfather's once icarus-tainted blood was in him. He changed as Oriencor's spirit tainted it further, eventually turning him into a vampyre. Now the boy seeks to destroy the world with his six "brother" icari. The darkangels have returned![/i]

[b][u]I will base my choices upon scores of originality and grammar/spelling. Also, there is a bit of whether or not you follow rules. And yes, I will not have a limit to how may can join, i have a set standard of at least a score of twenty-two. Each of the areas ranks out of fifteen for the first two, and as for rules, you break 'em, you lose the privelege.[/b][/u]

[b]Name:[/b]Arlbeth Aeriel Rangues/Fox Aeriel Hunter(formal/real name)

[b]Race:[/b]Half-icarus. Has only one set of wings as opposed to the traditional Icarian dozen. He does not feed off of blood or souls, but food and liquid as a normal human should.

[b]Age:[/b]29

[b]Class:[/b]Knight/Prince

[b]Weapons(3):[/b]Adamantine blade named Edge Adamantine, a whip, and a lance/spear with an Adamantine spearhead..

[b]Spells:[/b]None. Can be learned later.

[b]Bio:[/b]Second grandchild of above-mentioned heroes, he is the only one who can destroy his brother. He was trained to be the ultimate lancer and a knight. He holds tha abilities of his grandmother in his ability to wield the powers of the Ancient race, though his energy stems from pure benevolence and not evil or want for luxury. He has the emerald eyes of his grandmother.

[b]Appearance:[/b]Check the attachment.
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[i]Classes- NO COMBINATION CLASSES UNLESS YOU ARE ROYALTY. I.E. Knight/Prince, Lancer/King, etc.

[b]Lancer=[/b]Spearmen. Masters of the Jump ability. Cannot use magic.

[b]Knight=[/b]Warriors. Warrors that can use any weapon and use Armorbreak skills. Learns Black magic

[b]Mage=[/b]Uses a staff or an ankh. Masters of White and Black magic.

[b]Amazon=[/b]Masters of the whip. Have the ability of Flight. Cannot use magic.

[b]Archer=[/b]Masters of bows and daggers. Use the ability of Aim and can use Nature magic.

[b]Thief=[/b]Users of the daggers and shurikens, they use Steal abilities and Stealth magic.

[b]Mystic=[/b]No weapons but their own magic or blessed weapons. They use Braver abilities that allow them to wield any type of magical weaponry.

[b]Glaivewielder=[/b]Warriors descended from Erin, wielder of the glaive Bright Burning, they use Blade magic and Armorbreak abilities.[/i]
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Yes, that is it. I have finished the editing process. I pray you will all forgive me. Anyway, I shall soon post the attachment.[/color]
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[font=gothic][color=crimson][edit]You bet I'm changing this. Oh, and I haven't even [I]heard[/I] of these books, and that takes a bit.[/edit]
Name: Kinrade s'Xalerien

Age: 27

Class: Glaivewielder (Glaive, guisarme, whatever, they're all poleaxes)

Weapons: The demonic guisarme (A type of poleaxe) Rectifier, and a longsword named Alithiel. Both enchanted to various degrees. (I'll post the pic of Alithiel at some point)

Spells:None. Kinrade is one of those few individuals who are magically inept, no matter how hard they train. To balance this, Kinrade carries two enchanted weapons. (I didn't think it was fair otherwise)

Bio: A rather savage entity, who has been an outcast and a choice recluse for most of his life. A deathknight of the worst type. He was trained in the arts of fighting, which he quickly mastered. He spent far more time performing excercises to improve his agility while wearing armour. As such, it inhibits him not at all. Due to this, when he fought in tournaments as a youth, he always won. This incited arrogance, and blistering displays of contempt. The other trainees in the small area he grew up in began, as is natural, to hate him. In Kinrade's case however, he always backed up his contempt when challenged, and often humiliated those who attacked him. Eventually, he was set upon at night, by a group of four.

Despite the odds, he managed to kill three of them. The last was dispatched by another figure, who wielded a large, vicious axe in the shape of a demonic wing.

As the dark knight killed Kinrade's last attacker, Kinrade prepared to defend himself. Readying his own halberd, he anticipated the knight's first attack. Holding his own weapon back hand, Kinrade blocked, wrenched, and disarmed the knight. His follow up underhand strike rent his armour like paper.

Stunned, Kinrade stumbled back. There was no body beneath that blackened curaiss. Despite that, something rushed out. Something incorpreal, something disembodied, something that went right into Kinrade.

Possessed by some malevolent spirit, Kinrade stumbled away, and collapsed on the outskirts of town. When he awoke, he was chained to the altar of the local church, was an excorcism was performed upon him. When let loose, Kinrade asked for the axe of the knight he had killed, and cold-bloodedly massacred the entire village.

Warped by the demon entity that had once ravaged his mind, Kinrade is now a chaotic force who refuses to be quelled.

Appearance: The attachment, about six foot 2.[/font][/color]
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[color=green]I know the most bout the books so hehe i know what im a do. :-D

[B]Name:[/B]Aeriel

[B]Class:[/B] Human, (sometimes called a sorceress)

[B]Age:[/B] Unknown, about 17-20

[B]Appearence:[/B]
If you read the book you would know,but i shall explain.
She has long blond hair, a slender attractive body (good nough for a Icari, hehe)Her eyes are a Green, the color of sorceresses eyes, (This is Aeriel, the one John spoke of hehe)

[B]Bio[/B]
A body is but a vessel for the soul. As her Grandson was turned the Ancient Ravenna started construstion for Aeriels body. Makign her flesh and bone, Taking Aeriels sorceress green eyes and calling Heroin (a whie heroin, a messenger of the Anchients} back ot aid Aeriel. She foudn Aeriels Staff and called fourth Aeriels soul from the heavens, from its place on the crown of the madens. Aerile awoke and Talib, the little mage of downwending was called back. More would have to be done for Irrylath to return, if he ever did. Once Aeriel awooke She, Talib and Heroin set out in to the desert of Pendar, seeking then Golden Lion. She also had hopes of seeing her grandson...

Well, how bout that? hehe Good nough Brother?[/color]
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[color=teal]Hang on, sis. I gotta edit my own info. I finished reading the books. Now, to edit and make mre info. Lacroix, feel free to change a little of your information after you read the edit. I still have to score you, remember that. And also, here is the attachment pic of Fox.[/color]
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Name: Siren Kojia

Race: Unknown (What races can we be?)

Age: 27

Class: Knight

Weapons(3): Broad sword, dagger, throwing axe

Spells: None

Bio: A twelve year old Siren woke up one day to find that she had lost all memory of her past and present... For seven years she wandered the desert, picking up weapon skills... Several times she attempted to settle down with various cultures and races, but finding herself longing for the open road... She traveled to the mountians and stayed there for four long years before returning to the desert... She trained and learned the skills of cultures yet unknown to the majority of the world and became a master of the sword that she had carried as soon as she could pick it up... Now, on her 27 birthday, Siren sits in a bar thinking of her future

Appearance: Golden eyes, black hair, black chain mail, black pants, crimson armor, burgandy tatoo, pale skin [url]http://www.wizards.com/dnd/images/gallery/6_Female%20Barbarian.jpg[/url]
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Name: Xyluis Rinogen

Race: Human (But Must Have something else in him beacause he moves to fast for a human)

Age: 21

Class: Thief

Weapons: He has Mulitiple daggers That are Kept in dagger slots all over his jacket. Each dagger is keen edged and beautiful and there is a story behind each one...

Spells: He Can Cast haste and stealth on him self and can juction minor black magic onto his daggers whilst throwing them.

Bio: His past is hazy and there are few things that he remembers. One, is his sister. She got taken away by a vampyre and he needs revenge... She was the only family that he had everknown and his hunger for revenge is consuming him. Now he just goes after vampyres and steals whatever he needs on the way.

Appearance: Check Attachment...
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