Writing Hummm....poetry?

[Shinkoru]

[color=cromson]ide' like to know what u think...dunno where it came from.... but




You are
But a poor reflection
Of yourself.

But you don't fool Me,
With your Cool, clear
Unrippling
Outer surface.

Others gaze at You
And see themselves
In your careful
Yet indifferent
Reply

But I know
That behind
That cold perfection
Your blood runs
With mercury fire.

I have touched you
And come away Bleeding
From your razor
Sharp edges-
That catch poor
Unwary people
Who worship You[/color]

[Shinkoru]

[color=cromson]well.. whatca fink'? Dont mean to double post but im going to keep it to one or two threds...



Depression and Love

Depression is sumthin that makes me sad,
something I was hoping I would never have.
I can only regret what I haven't done,
the string of my fate...is already spun.

This my friends is what depression can do,
you lose your will to live and your hope too.
But it can be changed unlike the past,
I wasn't quick enough...I lost it all...so fast.

Love is something dealing with joy,
it's an attraction between a girl and a boy.
But it's more than just that,
it's when she understands you...and you understand back.

Now love...what can I say?
I never experienced it until this day.
I met who I thought was made for me,
But I was wrong.

Life is but a toil, can't you see?
Love is something that wasn't ment for me.[/color]

[Phantom]

these are beautiful my love. beautiful in the sense of uniphosorous simplicity, mixed in tune with a cordial triumph...also spendered with a hint of dexterous melancholy...nice my angel.

[Makai Kite]

Phantom, you read too much. But that's okay. So do I. Just not THAT much.

[Mitch]

[color=red] The first one was absolute genious. And the second was genious a little less. I loved the description in the first, it made me feel like I could feel the emotions run into me like a meandering river. Very nice.[/color]