Writing More "Poetry," If You Can Call It That...

[Biida]

It rained today. The rain came down in sheets, and it came down hard. It stung like hail, like needles, like bullets. Listen, listen to the storm... Do you hear it? It's brewing and bubbling, screeching and blaring in its lair... its coming... It came.
It rained today.
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That was, well.. It was.. *silence for a few minutes* I don't know WHAT it was. I just write weird things when I'm depressed.. ~.~;
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[u][b]Tear Away[/b][/u]

It's not like I ever mattered anyway.
I give and give
And you take away.

I thought we were friends,
And had secrets to share.
But you play with my head
And then you tear...

Everyone else always knows before me.
So much for the friends I thought we'd be.

I thought we were friends,
And had secrets to share.
But you play with my head,
And then you tear.

I found out from him -
Whom you barely know.
How true of [i]friends[/i] we are
Is now starting to show.

I thought we were friends,
And had secrets to share.
But you play with my head,
And then you tear

And Now You Tear Away
From Me.
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No real comment on that one so far. [And it's not about anyone so don't even ask. o.o;]

C&C please.

[Mitch]

[color=red] I like the way it seems to flow like a smooth river. That is what I mainly like. Also you state your feelings bluntly, going right to the truth other than just describing the feeling. Good job yet again![/color]

[zidane11]

I agree with anime lover. It also sounds really good because it perfectly describes today at my house. I'm in a really glum mood today.

[Biida]

Mmm.. Thanks guys. I've been needing that little ego boost for a while now.. *smiles* Just, thanks.

And just for the heck of it, a little..um... Well, its 17 syllables like a haiku but not really formed like one. It's just a really, really short poem that puts togethere how I've felt in the last two days.. Enjoy.~

I stand alone,
On dark grey waters;
Calling to the sea
For answers.

And I think that one's going in my sig. *runs off to put it in*

[Corey]

Great poemzes.
My favorite of yours is still Crimson Voices. I believe I am officially an admirer of your work. ;)
Hope that doesn't creep you out.

[Biida]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by DarkOrderKnight [/i]
[B]I believe I am officially an admirer of your work. ;)
Hope that doesn't creep you out. [/B][/QUOTE]

:blush: Wow. ^^; My work actually has an admirer.. :D Yay! *feels special now and smiles, then gives you a lollipop* Thanks. ^^

And now for a special treat. A (heavily edited) poem from my... Private collection. ;) In other words, my deeper works which none of you should ever see, but you'll see nonetheless. ^^;; Hehe; Enjoy it if you can.;


[u][b]Why?[/u][/b]

How the H*ll could you do this to me?
I don't know why, but I know I'm afraid...
I'm afraid of you,
Of what you'll do.
Afraid and filled with hate.

One day I'm fine,
The next I'm lost.
Confused and crying...
My Life the cost.
The cost it takes to please you.
The cost it takes to love you.
As if I could ever love you,
Love you again after what you've done.

Sometimes I love the feel of the fear and the pain.
Sometimes I hate it, the driving rains.

F*ck these memories...
They surface too easily.
They drag me down when they pull themselves up,
They're starting to drive me insane...

Sometimes they're joyous,
Although most are depressing...
What's the fun in that?
I won't comment.

The memories today, were happy and joyous.
Yet all they did was depress me.
I don't understand... Why?
...I don't know, I can't see...
I still don't know why you did this to me...

You know I can't hate you, yet I feel so much hate.
So who's it for this time?
Yet again, I don't know.

Not like I ever know anything..
I can never be what you wanted.
The fact still remains and still I am haunted.

You [i]try[/i] to be nicer
I [i]try[/i] to be better
But after a while I'm back in the gutter.

Why does this happen?
Why am I me?
Why can't I see..

Why do you hate me?

[Corey]

*Claps using the EGMV*
I loved it!
*Prints off a copy for his wall*

[Biida]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by DarkOrderKnight [/i]
[B]*Claps using the EGMV*
I loved it!
*Prints off a copy for his wall* [/B][/QUOTE]

*Falls over anime style at the EGMV* Oi vey. *coughs and stands back up, dusting herself off, then looks up and sees him printing out a copy for his wall* o.o....wow.

And the following is a completely random piece of sh*t thrown together in a period of about 2 minutes. Being hyper sure affects you strangely, no?

[b][u]Cows[/u][/b]

Cows,
Why are they what they are?
They aren't fuzzy, but in sense they are.
They don't moo, but they moo.

What [i]is[/i] a moo exactly?

Why are cows cows?
Couldn't they be chickens?
Or pigs?
Of fluffy pink rabbits?

Ah, so you scoff.
Oh well.

I still like cows. ^^

[Guest Morph]

I um like em all Britty... But Cows is my favorite, *stupid laugh* Hahaha..

Moo is a sexual calling to other cows? o_O Maybe not....

[Biida]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Hybrid [/i]
[B]Moo is a sexual calling to other cows? o_O Maybe not.... [/B][/QUOTE]

I honestly don't know...

Ken: LETS ASK TRAVIS \./
Britty:...; Er. Moving along.
Ken: XD

Here's another one..

[b][u]Your Faded Words[/u][/b]

It feels like you're fading away;
Lost in a misty fog...
I search for endless nights.
Oh, how I hope I'll find you.

We used to be inseperable,
Lovers under the sun.
Angels borne unto this world
Even though we'd lost our wings.

All you ever tell me, is how things should be.
Yet all you ever do are the acts that hurt me most.

Ever since yon days before;
Ever since the end.
The past begins to haunt us,
And friendship starts to fade.

I don't feel close to you anymore
All you say to me is automatic.
Like its programmed to your brain,
And subconscious is the writer.

I start to change,
Yet for the better.
You told me it was good,
It was what you wanted for me.

But change is coming with a price
A hefty one, I fear.
Thine heart is slowly drifting from mine
And as I reach out to grasp it again,
To hold you to my chest,
It drifts into the fog..
And I lose sight
Of you.

It feels like you're fading away;
Lost in a misty fog...
I've searched for endless nights,
But I'll never find you.

[Corey]

I really like that one too. :)
Sounds like something that happened to one of my friends.