Dragonz Fyre Posted October 28, 2002 Share Posted October 28, 2002 When are we truely ready to leave? To step out of our protective bubble of home, And learn to live by ourselves, alone, Is there ever a time thats right? People say its at the age of 16 or 18, But how many people acually leave at that age? Some leave before or after, It depends on the person. Which of you have acualy stayed behind, Past the age thats expected, And learned that had you left before, you would have experianced more. Which of you left before? Like, at the age of 14 or 15. And learned that you should have stayed behind, that you missed out on chances because you were a fool. Its a choice, its up to you. Just make sure that you know what your doing, That your not making a mistake, Because you only have one chance. The question remains, when? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Biida Posted October 28, 2002 Share Posted October 28, 2002 *smiles and gives it a thumbs up* It's great Cass. Quite true as well.. Heh.. *gives her a hug* And cheer up, girl. I promise to do the same. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sui Generis Posted October 28, 2002 Share Posted October 28, 2002 As Britty said its very good and true. I enjoyed reading it! Put alot of emotion in it, I respect that. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Empathy Posted October 28, 2002 Share Posted October 28, 2002 It's really great cass...you always been an awesome writer, and I think this an awesome poem, like the rest of them, on or off of OB. Whhere'd you get the idea for this one? Ilike it. Keep writing Gurl! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitch Posted October 28, 2002 Share Posted October 28, 2002 [color=red] It is good, but I can see many ways it could be improved. But the basis of it was well thought out. Good job.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Biida Posted October 28, 2002 Share Posted October 28, 2002 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Empathy [/i] [B]Whhere'd you get the idea for this one?[/B][/QUOTE] *Smirks* Would you believe, my boyfriend? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonz Fyre Posted October 28, 2002 Author Share Posted October 28, 2002 yes, your boyfriend and my big brother..brits b/f gaveme the inspiration to start thinking, Zach gave me the topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vegeta rocker Posted October 28, 2002 Share Posted October 28, 2002 i like though i m a fan of cleaner rhyme. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zidane11 Posted October 28, 2002 Share Posted October 28, 2002 I like it. It's real good food for the mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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