Writing My poem, and how long it takes you.

[Genkai]

well, attached is a poem. im not just typing it, i just made it on photoshop yesterday.

uh, this poem only took me about 20 minutes. that's my ASESOME RECORD, beating my previous 4o minute record. yeah, apparently 4 days is a long time for a 20 line poem....T_T that's what my friends say. this one is a mere 4 lines, so it makes sense it didnt take me too long. i think mitch said he did 4 POEMS IN ONE NIGHT!!!

anyone else take a while to write a poem?


this is one of the worst poems ive ever written, but why not post it with the rest of this.

[Sui Generis]

Uhm..I don't know about anyone else but I personally can't read it. Anyways I'm more like you friend Mitch, average time it takes me for a 20-40 line poem is about 20 mins max.

[Mitch]

[color=red] Yeh, it's a little hard to read, but I got it. Actually, I think you have some talent in you, Genkai. You should post somemore. Oh, and about the four poems thing...well, it's not like I...uh, ruled the world or something...but yeh, I wrote four poems that's my record. I usually only get about one to two a night, though. Heh.[/color]

[Genkai]

i know, i realize now that it's hard to read, but i will personally translate the bad poem:

If you will guide me, I will trust you
and if you won't, I will love you
If you don't love me, I will sing
and forever will my love embrace you.

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[Sui Generis]

Wow, like Mitch said you have some talent there! I like it! Nice job!

[Genkai]

uh...thanks?

i dun like this poem very much, but im gonna start another one, and maybe i can finish it by tomorrow. thanks. that gave me a push towards this next poem. ^_^

i dunno about talent, but ive gotten better since 4th grsade when i started writing stories, and 6th when my larger poetry obsession began....